Update Log – 8/28/12

Added new passages “One Of Those Days,” “Taxa Notes – Star Walrus,” and “Terra Firma” with a sculpture illustration. (go Backstage for more views)

Added new passage “Thin Air” to the very end. Unlike “Time Dilation,” it’s got reliable narrators, so it should clear things up if you found the end confusing.

Just a note: I’m always looking for feedback on the science, story, characterization, and anything else you might think needs improvement. I’m new to the whole writing thing, so if you find anything confusing, incomplete, or just plain badly written, please let me know! I don’t bite.

This thing, however, does:

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